Critisism about my routine please

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okay guys, I've been practicing the cardini change with the advises that I took from you guys, and mainly from Fezzikthemagician. so here's my video showing the change (with a made up trick that involves an exposed cardini with one hand. and failed flourishes.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4WfuhGLFvuk

any constructive critisism is welcome. (go easy on me I'm a n00blet)

thanks!